Willow's Story~

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Willow's Story~

Post by Willowrose on Fri Jun 09, 2017 11:42 pm

Here is where I will be posting my Fursona Story. *deep breathes*
Hopefully it won't turn out cringy

Prologue:
I feel a gentle breeze on my face and breathe in the calm of the dawn. Opening my eyes, I see a face. It looks at me lovingly, "So you've finally opened your eyes." The face looked kind and caring. It continues staring at me and speaks again, "Why, you have eyes just like mine." I suddenly remember how familiar the voice is...This is my mother.
I look around, seeing that I am in a den of some sort, made entirely of vines and many other plants that I can't name.
"She finally opened her eyes?" I hear another voice gasp.
My mother turned her eyes to the cat, then back to me and began explaining to me, who I am and what my purpose is. "You are Willowkit of Cloudclan. As you may have guessed, I am your mother, Branchfur. This here is your older brother, Birchpaw."
"My older brother?" I mew. My mother's face beams as words pass my lips. "Yes," she responds, "your older brother". She makes a gesture with her tail, as if she's telling the cat to come closer.
In moments I was looking at my brother's blue eyes. "It's so great to finally see you Willowkit!" he purred. my mother let out a small chuckle, "Birchpaw has been very eager to see you. I didn't want him to disturb you while you were too young, so he has been waiting."
Birchpaw suddenly walked up to me and put his head up to mine. "I promise you that I'll protect you from anyone that dares harm you." he said with his eyes closed. I didn't fully understand his words, being a kit, but I nearly cried.
He opened his eyes and looked at me once more. Blushing, he ran out of the den.
I smiled, feeling as if nothing could ever go wrong in the peaceful Cloudclan.

This was my earliest memory. A memory before things got worse and worse.

(I'm most probably going to edit this since I am writing as Tired Wills, but here's to hoping I do well. Also, anyone can post here, I will keep on editing my story into this post to complicate things less)


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Re: Willow's Story~

Post by Roseblossom on Sun Jun 18, 2017 8:32 am

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa it's good :D


i especially like the lil cliffhanger-ish thing at the end

cant wait to see what happens to poor lil wills ;w;

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Post by Willowrose on Sun Jun 18, 2017 8:36 am

Thank you so much Roseeehhh <33
This is my first time writing a fictional story of my own ideas, so I'm not all that experienced at writing, but hopefully it'll turn out as sad as I want it.
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Post by Tornadostorm on Mon Jun 19, 2017 4:07 pm

AHHh this is so good OuQ I love the ending, and I also love where you started the story from, vury smurt! (smurter then me) I can't wait to see what happens next

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