Sands of Time: Book 1- Famine (Prologue Posted!)
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Sands of Time: Book 1- Famine (Prologue Posted!)
Sands of Time is a series I'm writing about a pack of velociraptors struggling to survive in the Gobi Desert. On a long, painful journey to a new home, they must evade predators, beat the elements, and help each other if they wish to see the next sunrise.
Things You Should Know Before Reading
Real velociraptors didn't look like the ones in Jurassic Park. Realistic velociraptors had a coat of feathers and were about the size of today's turkeys.
This book is inspired by both Warriors and Guardians of Ga'Hoole.
A lot of the species mentioned in this story aren't exactly common knowledge. I'll try to describe them as best I can, but if you have any questions about them, don't hesitate to ask me.
Although this story uses realistic facts for its dinosaurs, there will be some slight exaggerations. Since all we have from dinosaurs are fossils, some things have to be left to the imagination, and I've filled those gaps with fictional things that will benefit the plot.
Characters
Pack of the Red Sand
Pack Leader: Ebony
Packmates:
Willow (Ebony's mate)
Havoc
Drizzle
Breeze (twin sister of Gale)
Gale (twin sister of Breeze)
Hatchlings:
Birch
Inferno
(more characters to be revealed)
Prologue
Things You Should Know Before Reading
Real velociraptors didn't look like the ones in Jurassic Park. Realistic velociraptors had a coat of feathers and were about the size of today's turkeys.
This book is inspired by both Warriors and Guardians of Ga'Hoole.
A lot of the species mentioned in this story aren't exactly common knowledge. I'll try to describe them as best I can, but if you have any questions about them, don't hesitate to ask me.
Although this story uses realistic facts for its dinosaurs, there will be some slight exaggerations. Since all we have from dinosaurs are fossils, some things have to be left to the imagination, and I've filled those gaps with fictional things that will benefit the plot.
Characters
Pack of the Red Sand
Pack Leader: Ebony
Packmates:
Willow (Ebony's mate)
Havoc
Drizzle
Breeze (twin sister of Gale)
Gale (twin sister of Breeze)
Hatchlings:
Birch
Inferno
(more characters to be revealed)
Prologue
- Spoiler:
- Things used to be better than this. Water was abundant; prey was plentiful. We could watch our hatchlings grow up in a safe environment. We were happy. Now, if you look around you, all you can see is sand as far as the eye can see. Well, sand and faded skeletons. The dry season has been particularly hard on my pack this time around. I've seen many a packmate succumb to starvation lately, and only two of the hatchlings made it out of their eggshells alive.
Our situation has become so desperate that my mate Ebony, leader of the Pack of Red Sand, left to find new territory. That was thirty sunsets ago, and he still has yet to return. I hope with all my heart that he is still out there somewhere, dashing through the dunes to take us to a new place we can call home. I can't stand the thought of leaving this place without him, but Havoc, our pack's strongest hunter, grows more restless by the day, and something tells me he won't hesitate to leave our territory, our memories, and my chance of seeing Ebony again if it means he becomes pack leader.
My thoughts are interrupted by the cold voice of Havoc himself. "Willow, we're having a pack meeting. Get over here."
I don't mean to be disrespectful, but my emotions get in the way of logic. "You are not pack leader, Ebony is. Only he can hold a pack meeting."
Havoc snarled and responded with, "If Ebony's still our leader, then where is he?"
I could slash his stomach for making that comment. I could tell him all the heroic things Ebony's done that he never could. But I don't. All I do is look down and scratch at the sand with my claws.
"Yes, that's what I thought. Now come, there is much to discuss."
I follow Havoc, dreading every step I take. I know this meeting will forever change the fate of this pack, and I have no desire to attend. But what else can I do?
Last edited by Vinekit on Sat Mar 08, 2014 8:12 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Added prologue)
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Re: Sands of Time: Book 1- Famine (Prologue Posted!)
Ahh, looks great! This seems like it should be an interesting book. :3
Re: Sands of Time: Book 1- Famine (Prologue Posted!)
Awesome story, Vineh! :D Cool way to start.
Is Willow telling the story?
Is Willow telling the story?
Re: Sands of Time: Book 1- Famine (Prologue Posted!)
Thanks. :3 The prologue is in Willow's point of view, but the perspective changes from time to time.
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