The 'Locke is coming to Unova...

by **Tornadostorm** Tue Jul 29, 2014 12:30 pm

If you do not know what the 'Locke is.. I will explain in the prolog.

Welcome... To my Poke'mon Black Nuzlocke... Where I will go to Unova, to try to save it and it's residents from total destruction. Not only do I have to stop the 'Locke, to save many innocent Poke'mon lives, but Team Plasma is up to something... And it is my job, to protect Unova from both.

I thought the 'Locke was through, when I defeated it in the Kalos region... But now, I have been called to Unova, to stop it there.

(For those who don't know, a Nuzlocke is basically a playthrough of a poke'mon game, where if one of your poke'mon faints, it dies, and you have to release it (Or leave it in the PC forever). And you can only catch the first poke'mon on a route, or new area. I also have the Duplicitous clause. Basically if I have a patrat, if I encounter another patrat on the next route, I can defeat it, and look for another poke'mon.)

(If you read the below spoilers, READ WITH CAUTION!!! THEY REVEAL HAPPENINGS YOU POSSIBLY HAVEN'T READ YET!)

Current Alive Poke'mon:

Current Alive-But-in-PC Poke'mon:

Current Dead Poke'mon:

by **Tornadostorm** Tue Jul 29, 2014 12:30 pm

Story Chapters

Prologue:

Chapter 1:

Chapter 2:

Chapter 3:

Chapter 4:

Chapter 5; "A Nervous Leader":

Chapter 6:

Chapter 7; "SHOCKWAVE":

After I got Sand Man, who I decided to go Route 3. I looked around. It was a very sunny place. I walked along until I saw a patch of long grass. Suddenly Cheren walked up to me. “Hey.” He said. Tossing a poke’ball between is hands “Let’s test our strength.” I nodded “Sure.” I sent Samurai out, and he sent his Snivy out.
I switched to Zander, and he Incinerated the Snivy, and it was an easy win. He also had a Purrloin, but I had grown very strong, and so the Purrloin wasn’t much much trouble. I had defeated Cheren.

Suddenly some Team Plasma grunts cam running past “OUT OF OUR WAY!” Me and Cheren took a step back, as they ran past us. We looked after them with confused looks. “What was that about?” Cheren murmured.

Suddenly Bianca and a little girl came running up to us with panicked expressions.
“Bianca? Why were you running?” Cheren asked in a startled voice.
“Hey!” She panted “Where were those people headed?” Cheren replied “That way, but..” He gestured behind us, to the direction the Team Plasma grunts had gone before. “..Why are you running now?” He finished his sentence.

“Oh, seriously?” Bianca groaned in a frustrated tone. “They run so fast!” The little girl with her whimpered, and looked at Bianca “Miss…Oh… My poke’mon..?” And she started crying. Bianca crouched, and held the little girl’s shoulders. “It’ll be okay, it’ll be okay. Don’t cry.” Cheren took a step forward. “Bianca, really, why were you running?” I glared at him ”You’re really so caught up on that?”

“You have to hear this!” Bianca exclaimed “Those people stole this girl’s poke’mon!” She said in a frustrated tone.

Cheren sighed “You should have spoken up sooner.” He turned to me. “Sarah, we’re gonna get that poke’mon back.” He turned to Bianca “Bianca, stay with this girl’s side.” She nodded. Cheren and I ran to the entrance of this cave at the end of the sunny path. We ran inside, and when we got inside, we saw the two Team Plasma members we were looking for. “Sarah!” Cheren said, beckoning me to his side. “This bothersome bunch doesn’t really listen to reason.”

I stood next to him, and I looked at the Team Plasma goons. “That child cannot use a poke’mon to it’s full potential. Doesn’t that make the poke’mon sad? Same with all your poke’mon! So HAND THEM OVER! Or better yet, WE’LL JUST TAKE THEM FROM YOU!” And he grabbed my bag, that held all my poke’balls. We had a tug-of-war over it. “SAMURAI!!” I cried. Samurai popped out of his poke’ball, and slammed into the Team Plasma grunt’s arm with Tackle.

He released the bag pretty easily, and sent his Patrat into battle. Samurai easily defeated it with Water Gun. As I said before, I’m stronger now.
“Wha..? How could we lose, when we have right on our side?!” The little girl’s poke’ball fell from his hand. I ran over and grabbed it before the Team Plasma grunt could, and bolted back to Cheren. He smiled at me “Good job, Sarah. Now, go return the poke’mon to the little girl.” I nodded, and was about to turn and leave, when two more grunts appeared “YOU NEED NOT RETURN IT!” They exclaimed to their partners. The other Team Plasma grunts moved out of the way, and the newcomers faced us “How troublesome.” One said. “Not only do you not understand, but you got in our way too. In a double battle, we will DEAFEAT YOU!”

Suddenly they both sent out a Patrat. Cheren looked at me “You wanna fight along side me as my partner?” I nodded, and sent out Samurai. Cheren sent out his Snivy. “THEN LET’S SHOW THEM HOW IT’S DONE!” We worked together to defeat them I have Samurai use Water Gun, then Cheren’s Snivy would follow up with a Vine Whip. Ultimately defeating the Team Plasma grunts.
One scowled “In order to liberate Poke’mon from Foolish People… We will take your Poke’mon!”
Cheren turned his nose up, and crossed his arms. “Whatever…What a waste of time. Come on, what reason could possibly justify stealing poke’mon and people?” “Poke’mon trainers like you, are making Poke’mon suffer.” Cheren scowled “What do you mean, Trainers are making Poke’mon suffer? I don’t get that at all.”

A team plasma grunt that we had fought before the double battle walked up. “You can take that poke’mon back to its trainer. But be aware of how this poke’mon suffers from being used by trainers. Someday, open your eyes to your own complicity.”
And they left. Cheren said something to me, I didn’t really listen.
After giving the poke’mon back, to Bianca (The little girl was rather happy) I went and looked for some tall grass. It wasn’t hard to find.

I walked around in it, then a little Pidove fly away. Then it turned around, and shot air at me and Samurai. “It’s using Gust!” I told him. “Use Tackle! Don’t kill it!” Samurai jumped into the air, hitting the Pidove in the belly. She collapsed to the ground. With only a few HP. I tossed a poke’ball at the Pidove.

1…2…3… It didn’t catch. She burst forth, and used Gust again.

I used another Poke’ball.

1…2…3…4!

I laughed “Hey there. I think I’ll call you Ginger.”

*Ginger (Pidove, Female, level 8-)*

I went back to Striaton City, and healed Ginger, and Samurai.
Then I went back to route 3
I took a branching path of route three down, that I hadn’t taken before because of Team Plasma.

To go there, I had to pass Bianca and the little girl. They both heartily thanked me, before I went on my way. I was walking along, taking on the scenery, when I encountered a Poke’mon trainer. “Hey! Let’s battle!” I looked at him with wide eyes. “Sure.” I sent out Ginger. She was in the front of my bag, because I wanted her to gain levels. (While I was walking around, she had gained a few levels, and was now level 10)

My opponent sent out a level 13 Blitzle. I smiled ”It probably doesn’t have any electric attacks. And if it does, they’re not offensive.” “Use Gust!” I called. Suddenly, The Blitzle use Shockwave. “Shockwave?!” I said in a shocked tone. It slammed right into Ginger. She screeched. “Ginger!” I exclaimed. She collapsed to the ground. Panting. “Oh man…” I murmured. I pulled her back, and sent out Samurai. “TACKLE!” I yelled. Samurai charged, and leaped at the Blitzle for a Tackle, but the Blitzle used Shockwave again. Samurai screamed. “SAMURAAAIII!” He hit the ground, hard, and tumbled backwards. He groaned weakly. “Ok, this is IT! ZANDER! GET IT!” Zander was released from his Poke’ball.

He leaped into the air, and used Incinerate. The Blitzle used Shockwave, and took a little less than half his health. He groaned as he hit the ground (Landing on his feet though.) “INCINERATE AGAIN!” I called. The incinerate had done about half the Blitzle’s health. But the Blitzle was faster, and hit Zander with another Shockwave before he used Incinerate. And when he did, his weakened body meant he did less damage to the Blitzle. It still lived. I glanced nervously at his weakened, and quivering body. ”I can’t switch him out… I wish I could… But no one else is strong enough.” I closed my eyes, then opened them again. “INCINERATE! WITH ALL THE SPEED IN THE WORLD!”

The other trainer (A young man, dressed in brown, with blond hair) chuckled at me. “It’s too late for you. Game over..”
Samurai regained consciousness, and slowly sat up. I took my chance to run over, and grab Ginger. She was really weak.

Zander looked over his shoulder at me and Samurai. He gave a weak smile, then turned and dashed towards the Blitzle. The Blitzle reared, then slammed down hard, sending a powerful Shockwave Zander’s way. “ZANDEEEERRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!” Samurai wailed. The Shockwave slammed into Zander’s stomach. Sending him crashing backwards. “Oh no..” I whispered. I ran over to him. He was quivering. Shaking, with sparks of electricity coming from him. “Oh, PLEASE no!” I wailed. Samurai forced himself to his feet, and rushed over.
Zander’s breathing was very shallow, and very quickly getting worse. Samurai put his hands on Zander’s arm. “Zander..” He whispered nervously. I put my ear to his chest… I heard nothing… Zander.. Was dead…

A pic of Zander's Death:

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Watcher had quickly dealt with the murderous Blitzle. And the Blitzle's trainer didn't say a word to us. He just sat there.

We found a good place, and buried Zander. My little Fire Monkey... All my poke'mon were present. Mistique seemed to be the most hurt. She put her divaish ways aside, to mourn her lost mentor. Samurai wrapped his arm around her, and she leaned on him. Ginger and Sand Man weren't has hurt as the others. They hadn't really gotten to know Zander yet.

Once the burial was over, I took the others to the PC, where they could recover from the difficult battle. Once everyone was healed, I did a quick head count. "...Sand Man, Ginger, Watcher, Mistique.... Where's Samurai?" The poke'mon looked around. They didn't know where he was. I returned everyone to their poke'balls, and went looking around Route 3.

It didn't take me long to find Samurai. He was training. Punching a Telephone pole over and over again. He seemed rather angry. "Oh Samurai.." I murmured sympathetically. As I approached him, I noticed his hands were glowing.

"Samurai?" He punched harder, and said through gritted teeth "LEAVE ME ALONE! I'M TRAINING!" He said I walked over to him. "ZANDER DIED PROTECTING ME! I CAN'T LET THAT HAPPEN AGAIN! I'M STRONGER THAN THAT! I'VE GOTTA BE!" I noticed the white glow spreading across Samurai's body. "Uh... Samurai." Suddenly He screamed in pain, and stumbled away from the Telephone pole. The white glow enveloped his entire body, and he started to be lifted into the air. "Samurai!" I said with slight glee.

He was so bright, I could barely look at him, then suddenly, he collapsed to the ground. All the white glow gone. I looked up at him... He was different.. Very different. He had evolved. He was a Dewott now. Samurai, the Dewott.

Chapter 8:

Chapter 9; "Digging for Bones":

by **Tornadostorm** Fri Aug 15, 2014 6:00 pm

Story Chapters 2

Chapter 10:

Chapter 11; "Gettin' Slimy, Sticky, and overall Icky":

Chapter 12:

Chapter 13; "I Thought you were a Friend!":

Chapter 14; "Digging through a Rock Slide:

Cheren turned to me “Alright… I’m going to train for the gym. I’ll see you later.” I nodded, and followed him out “I’m gonna head straight for the gym.” He nodded, and we went our separate ways.

I made my way to the gym, where I found Ghetsis. Discussing the transfer of the Team Plasma grunts we just captured with Clay. And for some reason, Clay let Ghetsis have the Team Plasma grunts, and the Sage. I scowled at him as he looked at me. “Come, challenge my gym.” And he walked inside. I followed him, but he was gone by the time I entered, Clay had disappeared. I looked around. The whole area was full of elevators. The correct path guarded by trainers. I made my way through the whole area, until I finally made my way down to Clay.

He smirked. “Well, looks like it’s about time to see what makes Elesa take such a shine to ‘ya!” And he sent out his poke’mon. His poke’mon were easily defeated by Samurai, and Tufty, he wasn’t much of a challenge for me.

Clay scowled. “Hmm… I see but I sure don’t like it! For such a youngin’ ya have an imposin’ battle style. I know ya got people who can dig up yer potential! Here! Take this!” And he gave me the Quake Badge. Afterwards he told me he had a TM for me, but that he would give it to me at the cave entrance at Route 6.

I made my way there. As I was entering Route 6, Bianca came running up to me. “Have you been at the gym?” She asked me excitedly “Wow! That’s Driftveil’s Gym Badge!” She gasped excitedly. Then she got a determined look on her face. “I can’t get all distracted by your shiny new badge... When people meet, they battle!” And we both sent out our poke’mon. Bianca was defeated easily. I rubbed her shoulder “keep growing. You’ll do well.” “Here, take this.” She said, and she handed me an HM. She handed me HM Fly. I very quickly taught it to Ginger. “THANK!” I squealed, and I hugged her. Afterwards I walked up to the entrance to the cave at the end of the route, and I saw a huge yellow web in the way. Suddenly Clay walked up behind me. “Thanks for waitin’. He said to me. “This looks to have been made by a Garvantula.” He explained. “Ok, Krokorock, let’s go.” His Krokorock easily destroyed the web. “This is Chargestone Cave. Enjoy yourself. And he walked off. I watched him go curiously.

Then I shrugged, and walked inside. I didn’t get far before suddenly a Klink flew down from the ceiling, and attacked me. I tossed Twitchy out. “TWITCHY! SUPER FANG!” Twitchy took out half the Klink’s strength. I tossed a poke’ball..

1…2…3…4! It caught
I looked at him. “Huston. It MUST be Huston!”

*Hudson (Klink, Male. Level 26-)*

And Huston was sent to the PC.

I continued walking, then suddenly two people dressed like ninjas appeared out of nowhere, and grabbed my shoulders “Come.” Is all they said. And they tugged me down along the cave a bit, until I saw N. I scowled, as they dragged me up to him. “My lord, N, we brought the one you wanted.” They said, and they all shoved me forward. I stumbled, and fell forward on my hands and knees at N’s feet.

N looked down on me with a scowl, then his gaze softened, and he reached down, grabbed my hand, and helped me to my feet. “Ah yes. That was the shadow Triad, just now. Ghetsis enlisted them in Team Plasma. Apparently, they were the ones who prepared the Galvantula nest at the cave entrance.” He looked around, as I scowled suspiciously at him. “Chargestone Cave. I like this place. Formulas express electricity, and it’s connection to poke’mon. If people did not exist, this would be an ideal place.” He put his hand on my shoulder, digging his fingers into my skin. I moaned softly. “You have been chosen, you know. Does it surprise you I said that.” I shook my head. My face still slightly twisted in pain. Then I pulled my shoulder away from his grip. He turned away from me.

He scowled “Such news should be a surprise..” He shrugged. “I told Ghetsis about you and your friends.” He sounded rather intimidating…Like he was planning on hurting Cheren and Bianca! I scowled at him defensively. I wouldn’t let him hurt them! “After I did, he apparently used the Shadow Triad to find out about you.” He put his hand to his chin, and looked up at the ceiling. “Cheren is pursuing the ideal of strength.” He smirked, and said in a sarcastic voice “Poor Bianca has faced the sad truth that not everyone can become stronger.” Than he pointed at me, his whole arm stretched towards me. “And you are not swayed either way-“ He put his hand back in his chin, though this time he stared at me, like he was examining me with his eyes. “More of a neutral presence.” He smiled, slightly evilly. “Which is apparently a good thing.”

He turned his back on me, and lifted his nose proudly. “Team Plasma will be waiting for you ahead.” I watched after him. My face locked in a frown. ”Well, what else am I supposed to do? I guess I’ll go on. If N has more to say to me, let him say it. I may be able to use it against him in the future.” And I walked on. N had already disappeared into the darkness.

I was walking along the tunnels, alight with sparking electricity, when suddenly a trainer rushed up to me. “HEY! Let’s BATTLE!” I nodded “Sure!” I sent out Twitchy, he sent out his Drilbur. Ginger freed herself from her poke’ball. “Twitchy, your exhausted from all those other battles. Let me handle this.” He nodded, and went to stand by me. Ginger hovered above the Drilbur, watching him closely. “Okay, Ginger! Air Slash!” I called. She charged forward for an Air Slash. As she was flying in close, she saw the Drilbur sharpen his claws on each other. ”Hone Claws?” I thought. ”A move that makes your attacks stronger… He must have a plan in mind.” “Hey Ginger! Let’s finish this off quickly, just to be safe!” Ginger slammed into the Drilbur, doing decent damage, but it would be a few more attacks before this Drilbur was defeated. “Ok, again!” And she charged for another Air Slash. The Drilbur used Hone Claws again. This was very confusing. The damage Ginger did this time meant that one more attack would end this fight. “Okay, Ginger! One more time!” I said she charged forward. Suddenly, the Drilbur lifted his claws. I gasped. The ceiling started to crumble… It was Rock Slide he was using!

“GINGER GET OUT OF THERE!” Twitchy who was standing next to me, gasped. She was agilely dodging the attacks, until one rock… Hit her straight in the back. She slammed hard into the ground. With the rock pinning her, she was unable to dodge the other rocks. And they created a mini mountain of stones ontop of her. All I could see was her wing-tip. “GINGEER!!!” Twitchy cried. He charged forward and tried desperately to dig her out from the pile of stones. I wiped a tear from my eye, and tried to hold back my sobs as best as I could. I put my hand on Twitchy’s shoulder. He slowed his digging, and looked up at me. Tears streaming from his eyes, as they were mine. “Twitchy… There’s no way she could have survived that.”

A Pic of Ginger's Death:

He broke into sobs. I crouched next to him. Hearing him sob, made me start to cry much harder as well. I crouched down next to the heartbroken Watchog, and put my arm across his back. I looked up at the murderous Drilbur, and his Trainer. “Don’t worry Twitchy, we will avenge her!” I grabbed Tufty’s poke’ball. “TUFTY! GO!” And I released the Whimsicott from his poke’ball.

He made quick work of the Ground-Type Drilbur. And with his Razor Leaf, he also helped us recover Gingers beaten and battered body from the Rock Slide-wreckage. I carried her in my arms, the rest of the way through Chargestone Cave.

Chapter 15:

Chapter 16; "Putting Spirits, to Rest":

by **Tornadostorm** Fri Aug 15, 2014 6:01 pm

Story Chapters 3

Chapter 17:

Chapter 18; "Ice-Cold Katie":

Chapter 19:

Chapter 20:

Chapter 21:

by **Tornadostorm** Fri Aug 15, 2014 6:08 pm

Story Chapters 4

Chapter 22; "Druddigon's Revenge":

Iris looked at Drayden disappointedly “Aww! He’s gone. Is he okay? He looked kinda scary.” I walked up and put my hand on her shoulder. Drayden smiled as much as he could behind his mask. “Don’t worry Iris.” He murmured “He’s the strongest Trainer in all of Unova.” I sighed ”I doubt that. I’d bet even N is stronger now. I know losing my dear poke’mon has given me more strength.” Drayden moved his warm gaze towards me “Well, Sarah is it?” I nodded “Come to my home.” I let go of Iris and made a quick nod of acknowledgement. Drayden began “As Alder asked, I’ll tell you everything I can about the legendary Dragon-type Poke’mon.” “Okay.” I said as cheerily as I could muster, with the serious mood. Drayden walked off, and Iris caught my attention by tapping me.

“Do you know where Drayden’s home is?” I asked her. She smiled happily “You bet! If it’s Opelucid City, I can take you anywhere. As for the story of Zekrom and Reshiram, we’ll tell you all we know about it!” I sighed. “Okay, let’s hear it.” She gestured ahead of her. “This way!” And we started walking together. Iris kept gesturing and calling to me when I started to go the wrong way, which was fairly often.

We went down a narrow path past the Poke’mon Center Iris pointed to the house infront of us “Just a little farther!” We entered what was apparently Drayden’s house, and Iris walked over, and stood next to Drayden who was waiting for us. His room was dark, and didn’t really have any furniture in it. I looked around surprised, and confused. I approached Iris and Drayden. Drayden closes his eyes, and begun. “I’ll explain.” He pointed to my bag. “What you are holding is the Light Stone. Reshiram, who will likely awaken from the Light Stone, and Zekrom, who is already awake, were once the same Poke’mon.” Iris smiled at him. “That single Dragon Poke’mon, along with twin heroes, brought a new region into being.” Iris said, her tone still oddly cheery.

“And people and Poke’mon had happy lives!” She finished flailing her arms in the air as gestures. Drayden put his hand on her shoulder to calm her. “One day, however. The twin heroes, the older brother who sought truth, and the younger brother who sought ideals, began to argue about how to decide which one of them was right… The single Dragon-Type Poke’mon that had been with them all that time split its body into two. One sided with the older brother, and the other with the younger brother.” Iris took over. “In its pursuit of ideals, the black Dragon-type Poke’mon sought to usher in a new and better world… Its name was Zekrom.” I nodded, trying to take it all in. Iris smiled and continued “And the other, the white Dragon-type Poke’mon, sought truth, and to usher in a new world—a world of good. Its name was Reshiram.”

Drayden nodded to Iris. “Because the two of them were once the same entity, their battle raged endlessly. And neither one could be declared the winner. They simply exhausted themselves. The twin heroes proclaimed that there was no side that was right and ceased the conflict.” Iris hushed him with her hand “But, but… The two heroes’ sons started the battle again! And an instant later, Zekrom and Reshiram destroyed Unova with lightning and fire! Then they disappeared.

But, but… If people work with Poke’mon in the right way, we don’t have to worry anymore about the world being destroyed. I mean, Zekrom and Reshiram worked hard for everyone and made a new region! So, it should be alright, I think.” Drayden waited for her to finish, and continued “True. Poke’mon cannot speak. People may hurt Poke’mon even more by imposing their selfish thoughts on them, but, no matter what, Poke’mon and people believe in each other, need each other, and will continue to live together…” Iris cheered gleefully at Drayden’s words “Yeah!” Then her attitude returned to as serious as it could be (Which wasn’t very serious at all) as she continued. “So I’m never gonna forgive Team Plasma for trying to separate Poke’mon and us!” Drayden hushed her. “Sorry. We got a little off topic at the end. That is everything we know.” He sighed “Unfortunately, we don’t know how to wake up the legendary Poke’mon…”

He grew a slightly determined look “I made a promise to Alder. You must win the Gym Badge from the Opelucid Poke’mon Gym. Sarah…” his tone took a change that I didn’t expect… Maybe one I didn’t like… “I’ll be waiting for your challenge at the Poke’mon Gym.” And he walked off. I nodded in thanks to Iris, and left, myself. I made my way to the Gym. Mistique in the front of my party. The room was composed of two black snake-like mechanical dragons. You walked on their back, and controlled their head’s position by jumping on their arms. As I made my way through, my opponents were Fracture. Allot of Fracture… And a Dino thrown in there somewhere. Mistique moved her glasses in such a way they shined “I think I can take this dearie.” She purred. I nodded “Go for it.” And she completely owned the Fractures.

We were at fourth or fifth trainer. He was dressed in black. I sent Mistique out. “Alrightie girl! Let’s go!” Mistique leaped forward from walking alongside me. He sent out a Fracture. I sighed in relief inwardly. I was starting to gain confidence in Mistique. “Night Slash!” He lashed her tail back and forth “Through these glasses… Everything is darker… Even the night…” And she leaped forward and her claws grew dark as she slashed the Fracture. The Fracture stumbled backwards, and fell over. The trainer called him back to his poke’ball. And sent out a…Druddigon.. I exhaled nervously. “Ok, Mistique… The quicker the better.” She nodded, her glasses glinted again. “Right. Fast. On it, dearie.” And she leaped forward, and used Night Slash again. The Druddigon roared, and stumbled backwards. He snarled and growled. His trainer whispered something to him. And he charged forward at Mistique “HOW DAAAARE YOUUU!??!?!?!” Mistique gasped, and cowered away from him. He landed infront of her, and punched her right in the chin.

She went flying backwards, and slammed into the dragon we had been walking around on. I gasped and looked over my shoulder. I ran over and caught her before she fell off the platform we were standing on, and fell to my knees. Mistique still in my arms. I felt tears welling up in my eyes as I looked at her. She was writhing in pain in my arms. “Mistique…” I whispered sorrowfully. I gently removed her glasses, and examined them. Not a scratch on them. I closed my eyes, and a tear streaked down my cheek.

I gently lifted her chin. She yowled in pain. I winced at the wound that resided on her beautiful neck. ”There isn’t enough time… To get her to a Poke’mon Center…” I felt more tears streaking down my face and I began to sniffle. My heart aching with pain for my beloved poke’mon. Mistique opened her eyes. Dull and clouded over with pain, and the nearness of death. She slowly reached up her head, and licked the tears away from my left cheek. “There.” She rasped. “Now you’re…Beautiful…Again…” I heard a soft exhale come from her mouth, as her head fell limp in my arms. I burst into an uncontrollable sob. “MISTIQUE!! PLEASE COME BACK!! COME’ON! ONE MORE BREATH! THAT’S ALL I WANT!!! ONE…More…Breath…” I began to sob once more, and I squeezed Mistique close to my chest. ”Please...Protect her now, God..” after about 30 seconds of me just squeezing my dead poke’mon close to me, and sobbing. I slowly began to calm down a bit. Still near sobbing, I slowly set Mistique’s body down in front of me.

A Pic of Mistique's Death:

I released my other poke’mon from their poke’balls. They all gathered around Mistique’s body. I leaned for comfort against Samurai’s powerful foreleg, and whispered to him “I’m so scared, Sammy. So very scared…. If I can’t survive the Dragon Gym without losing someone, how am I possibly going to survive N?” Samurai looked at me. His own eyes wet with tears. “S..Sarah… There’s nothing you can do… Misti..Mistique, would have wanted you.. To… Continue.” I smiled softly. I looked up at Twitchy “Hey, Twitchy… Can you please…” I stood up, and rage started to fill me. “DEAL WITH THAT BOZO WHO KILLED OUR FRIEND!?!?!” Twitchy growled, and whipped around. Charging forward, and slamming into the Druddigon with a Hyper Fang. It went down with one hit. The trainer looked at me “…Move on.” I ran up and punched him “THAT’S ALL YOU CAN SAY, YOU MURDERER?!” He scrambled away from me. I turned to my Poke’mon… Seeing Mistique’s body caused the grief to return, and I said “come on, you guys… Let’s go…” And I walked over, and picked up Mistique’s body, and lead the other poke’mon out of the gym.

I buried Mistique in the soft dirt surrounding the Gym. I looked at her grave.. “I am so sorry… This… Shouldn’t have happened.” I turned, my head hung low. I needed someone to help my team as quickly as possible. Someone who could take over, and fill the gaping hole Mistique left in our team. I walked over to the nearby PC, and examined the poke’mon contained within. My eyes glistened with fondness, as I looked over Shalom. I nodded decisively “Shalom, it’s you and me now.” I pulled her out of the PC, and worked really hard to train her so she caught up with the rest of her teammates. She angerly punched the wooden post that I had chosen her to train with. I watched her. Observing how she acted, how strong she was Samurai was standing next to me, and I murmured to him “So, Samurai. What do you think? Does she pass the ‘You--Can--Handle--Yourself Test’? Samurai smiled, a determined look on his face “I think she can do it.” I nodded. “Okay, then. Hey! Shalom!” The little Mienfoo looked over, panting. Her face-fur wet with sweat. And a slightly angry look on her face. “You should be proud of yourself! I wouldn’t think you’d get Samurai’s OK so easily! You passed! You can handle yourself now. You don’t need a trainer.”

Sandy (Otherwise known as Shalom’s trainer) sighed in relief. Shalom’s eyes grew wide “Really?!” She said excitedly. “Yep! Here, go see what you can find in the grass. I’m sure someone’s willing to let you test your metal on them.” Shalom nodded, and wandered into the long grass of Route 9. Suddenly a Liepard jumped out at her. She leaped back easily dodging it’s attack. I gasped my mind was instantly going to MIstique. I sighed sorrowfully. Shalom easily K.Oed it with one Force Palm. She laughed. “I CAN handle myself! I CAN!” She started to glow. My eyes lit up slightly. She was lifted into the air, and the light dispersed. She, unlike most of the poke’mon I had evolved, landed on her feet. She was a fully evolved Mienshao now.

Samurai ran forward and nuzzled her softly “Good job, Shalom. I know you’ll make me proud.” He had his usual determined look on his face. She smiled proudly at him “I know I will, sir Samurai.” (It’s odd, but that’s what she called him. She didn’t give anyone else names like that… She just called Samurai, sir Samurai.)

I sighed anxiously. “Okay then. Your level 50, Shalom, just like the rest of the team.. Let’s finish what Mistique started.” The two poke’mon out on the field nodded, and I returned them to their poke’balls. “Shalom.” I said to the Ultra Ball she was held in “Let’s test your power. It’s your job now to deal with the Dragon Gym, ok?” I could tell she didn’t mind, and made my way back to where everything had happened in the gym.

Surprisingly, Shalom was very trustworthy. She easily dealt with the Fractures that seemed to infest the Gym. I made my way to the final Gym Leader. Drayden. He smiled calmly. Thought I felt anything but calm. “Welcome. Thank you for coming. I am Opelucid Poke’mon Gym’s Leader, Drayden.” “I know.” I responded grumpily He lifted an eyebrow, and continued “as the mayor, I’ve given everything to developing this city. As a Trainer, I’ve simply been pursuing greater strength.” He looked at me as if he was examining me. “But what I’m searching for now is a young Trainer who can show me a bright future. Perhaps you can show me that future, the way Iris has?” And blinded by rage, I sent Shalom out. He sent his Fracture out. It was as easily 1-hitted as all the other Fractures in the gym. Then to my dismay, he sent out a Druddigon. I sent out Shalom fearfully. She was about to attack, but suddenly Twitchy released himself from his Poke’ball. He put his paw infront of Shalom. “Let me handle this, okay, Shalom?” She looked at him with a shocked expression. Then she stood next to me. Twitchy Charged forward.

He Hyper Fanged the Druddigon. It didn’t quite K.O it. ”Oh NO!” I mentally freaked out. And I had good reason. The Druddigon growled “I DON’T LIKE IT WHEN POKE’MON HURT ME!” He charged forward, and just before he punched Twitchy, Twitchy collapsed, and started having a seizure. I gasped, and ran forward. The Druddigon’s foot kicked Twitchy in the gut, and he fell forward. I picked up Twitchy’s convulsing body. “TWITCHY! TWITCHY!!!” I looked at him ”It’s that MARK again! What is it?!” Suddenly I heard him Gasping for breath. “Twitchy! Come on Twitchy! Not you too!” Drayden just sat there. A nervous look of concern on his face, as he patiently waited for me to do something. I didn’t know what to do, so I sprayed him with a Hyper Potion. Slowly, he stopped convulsing, and just lay there in my lap. Panting.

Shalom walked over and crouched by him “thank you for trying.” She whispered softly. I nodded to her, and tossed Tufty’s poke’ball. “OK, Tufty! Try out that new move of yours! Try…. THAT Move!” Tufty looked at me. Excited and nervous at the same time. He nodded. And lifted his head into the air, and I could see his arms shaking with strain. Suddenly a strong windy rain crashed down on the battle field. The Druddigon put his hand up to protect his face. Suddenly a huge gust of wind, mixed with the slick ground because of the rain, cause the Druddigon to slip all the way off the platform we were standing on. Drayden gasped, and looked over the edge. Before the Druddigon hit the ground, Drayden called him back to his Poke’ball. He growled, and faced me. “Alright! This is all I have left!” And he sent out a Haxorus. Shalom looked up. “Can I..?” “Yep.” I said calmly. Regaining my composure, as Twitchy sat up to watch what was going on. Shalom charged forward, and easily took care of the Haxorus with one, or two Drain Punches.

He nodded as he returned his fainted Haxorus to its poke’ball. “Wonderful.” He smiled “I’m grateful we had a chance to meet and battle.” I nodded more reluctantly. He gave me the Legend Badge. I looked at it in awe. It was amazing for the 8th, and final Gym Badge. He also gave me the TM Dragon Tail. I accepted it gratefully. I taught it to Samurai, who seemed happy to be able to slap opponents out of the battle with one swish of his Simatours. Drayden squinted “Head for the Poke’mon League, and go after Alder.” And he told me where it was.

Chapter 23:

Chapter 24; "Victory Road":

Chapter 25; "Marchin' through Marshal":

Chapter 26; "Cryin' at Caitlin, for Feelin' the Thunder":

Chapter 27; "Feelin' Grim with Grimsly":

Chapter 28; "Shapin' up on Shauntal":

by **Tornadostorm** Fri Aug 15, 2014 6:08 pm

Story Chapters 5

Chapter 29; "The Beginning of the End":

Chapter 30; "Confronting N":

Chapter 31; "We had it All Wrong":

Chapter 32; "The True Face of Evil":

Chapter 33; "N's Farewell":

by **Tornadostorm** Fri Aug 15, 2014 6:10 pm

Post Story Chapters

Post Chapter 1; "A New Mission Part 1":

"Post Chapter 2; "Massacre":

by **Jewelsky** Fri Aug 15, 2014 6:55 pm

'Sokay. xD Nice new chapters~

by **Midnightflame** Mon Sep 22, 2014 7:51 am

I have only read the first chapter so far but its awesome!

by **Shadowdragon** Mon Sep 22, 2014 12:01 pm

I've read several. I like them. :3
I'll read the rest when I can.

by **Jewelsky** Thu Sep 25, 2014 4:37 pm

Poor Ginger D:

by **Shadowdragon** Thu Sep 25, 2014 5:32 pm

Mrs. Dipper Pines wrote:Poor Ginger D:

I know D:

by **Jewelsky** Fri Sep 26, 2014 5:54 pm

Mistique is stylish @o@

by **Jewelsky** Sun Sep 28, 2014 2:55 pm

NUUUU MISTIQUE D":

by **Tornadostorm** Thu Oct 09, 2014 3:52 pm

CHAPTER 25 IS UP IN MY NUZLOCKE! FROM NOW ON IT WILL BE EXTREMELY IMPORTANT, AND EVERY BATTLE WILL BE DICTATED DOWN TO THE TURN (to the best of my memory) FEEL FREE TO READ IF YOU ARE AT ALL INTERESTED

by **Jewelsky** Thu Oct 09, 2014 5:26 pm

Nooooo death noooo *sobble*

by **Tornadostorm** Fri Dec 19, 2014 10:14 am

THE NUZLOCKE STORY IS DOOONE

Yep, I finally posted the final chapter of the main story! I hope you guys like it! There's still going to be more chapters, such as Katie and I going through the E-4, and the Post Game :3 (Oh and just so you know, I did NOT finish the post game in RL, so the chapters of my encountering all the sages will be totally... Well, what WOULD have happened, and not what DID happen :) Hope you guys enjoy the main story! And look forward to the post story chapters!)

by **Jewelsky** Tue Dec 23, 2014 9:18 am

Yay :D
I love it~

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